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Post by Kichi-sama on Feb 6, 2004 17:59:09 GMT -5
Alright, yea, I wrote a poem. Its not much, but why the hell not post it here, its prolly my best written work...about...ever...
The taste of tears, The feeling of fears. A life of pain, With not a trace of gain. The love I've felt, The pain I've been dealt. A life thats been battered, The heart has been shattered. This great sorrow Shall be in every morrow. Why go on living When life's unforgiving? An empty existence, She's full of resistance. The blood I see flowing, This is how I'm going. I really am sorry, For my folly. Goodbye... Goodbye...
And no, I'm not gonna commit suicide... *mutters* I jus wrote this...and yea...about what happened between me and Saph...
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Post by Laguna on Feb 6, 2004 21:23:34 GMT -5
pretty good... i like it
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Post by Kichi-sama on Feb 6, 2004 21:24:41 GMT -5
Wow...I actually wrote a poem someone likes...
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Post by Laguna on Feb 6, 2004 21:27:21 GMT -5
Heh heh... which maybe i'm just being really nice cuz i'm no longer a noob... who knows ^-^;;
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